Friday, April 11, 2008

however, the plucking of petals shall not affect the verdict.

i am not iced
(i am.. noticed)
or sliced
though, variety is the spice..
'they'
say,

of wanton desire
i am no longer made

and without all the ingredients,

i fall flat
at high temperatures.


adventure may have been mentioned
in my last sentence
or two
but upon review,
grammatical
errors
were found

improper use of personal pronouns.

for me
to be
consumed
is a matter
of taste

when i offered a piece of me
it was an exclusive offer

though tasted
and had
i'm about to go bad
in this state

on this plate

i don't bake..

and 'you'

could not be
replaced
by
any
other
personal
pronoun

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